3 Strengths and 3 Weaknesses of Each Sample Essay

Paper One:

Strengths: good information, easy to follow, no grammar or spelling mistakes
Weaknesses: paragraphs were very long, a ton of information thrown out at once, sentences seemed to be extremely complex and long

Paper 2:

Strengths: Decent intro, sources were alphabetical, entertaining
Weaknesses: informal, poorly formatted, and the citations were few and far between.

Paper 3:

Strengths: Great intro, good format, title page was good and there was a running header

Weaknesses: may have too many sections, could be more concise to keep the reader's attention, needs DOI numbers in the references section

Paper 4:

Strengths: Well written intro, good language, understandable presentation of the information
Weaknesses: Poor formatting, very few internal citations, hard to tell which section is which

Paper 5:

Strengths: correct APA formatting, well thought out structure with headings, references page is good
Weaknesses: a few punctuation errors, uses unnecessarily technical terms, could use a few more internal citations

Paper 6:

Strengths: Great intro, good structure, and correct formatting
Weaknesses: Not enough citations (4),  certain internal citations are incorrectly formatted,  may need to put urls or DOI numbers on some of the citations

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